Well, erm. I just finished, and I did not realize how close I was to finishing when the game forgot to load a script. But now that I finished it, I guess I'll put my comments here?
1. That was a pretty good level, too bad the first time I forgot Viel and Vanilla.
2.

- Is it me, or is his colour Verdigris-green? He's not the dark-blue-ish his textbox is.
3.

- The first thing I thought for a while was if he/she was a male or female, but I ended up saying he/she was female. Probably because he/she had Victoria's colour except more flashy.
4.

- "If you're a male, you're the only hot pink male Villi I ever have seen." - What I thought when I first saw her.
5.

- You're green, too! Except you're a darker green, but you're still green! (I confused him and Valso my first time through, actually.)
6. Vanilla (She really needs a smiley thing) - "She was arrested for being white. RACISM." And then Vita said "That's racist!" I still am forever going to wonder, is she really insane or was that a joke?
7.

- The Voon Show? That was a great show. I liked it.
8.

- Okay, now that you're the new engineer, what about Verdigris? Where even IS Verdigris?
9. The first few times Villi was said, I clapped (I had missed the literal first time, so it was when a terminal in the secret lab said it. I then got annoyed that it was only capitalized once, though it was a noun.
10. Overall, a good level. A few times where I had to do some fancy footsteps, and once I had to power through from "It's almost like jumping" to "RUN" because I glitched in a spike over and over! Atleast all scripts worked.
11. I encountered glitches throughout the place, like in Split (first room), Viridian would already be on the roof and his text would appear over Valso's head!
12. I wonder what kind of party they had...?
And about that debug terminal, I saw it too and activated it on both the playthroughs, until the powerthrough where I left it alone. Interesting...